I made the tree on the left look more massive, revised the split in the fallen tree trunk, and added a silhouette of a bobcat (referencing the witch's transformation into a cat..)
I'm not sure about the position of the bobcat..so i can always reposition it somewhere else. And I just realized that maybe the owl would suite the hostile forest better...and then incorporate the bobcat into the friendly forest? haha.....hm...I don't know :/
feedback would be much appreciated, thanks!
-Kevan
Hi Kevan. Definitely feeling the mood right away. This is looking good. Just a couple of things. I'd ditch the bobcat. I don't think you need it. Besides, if he's going into that opening of the trail, I wouldn't follow him. I wouldn't mind your using the owl again. It would tie the two pieces together, except in this one you can go intimidating. Try not to go over board, remember its still about environment. Again, watch your grouping spacing of objects. Overlap those mushrooms, arrange them better/more naturalisticly. Finally, top of picture plane: those leaves need to be broken up a bit:too parallel/boring as it runs at top of page. Also, ask yourself what are they attached to. Reference the fog, make sure not too even in design: subtlety... I like the design. Appealing.
ReplyDeleteok. I'll make the changes soon. Thanks Nelson
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